Title: Dark Hour of the Night
Series: Labyrinth
Author: Dansemacabre
Warnings: Het, kinky foreplay/mild torture scenes (not as disturbing as it sounds though).
Rated: M
Length: 64,772+
Update Schedule: Ongoing
Author's summary: After eight long years, Sarah returns to the Labyrinth only to find that the Goblin King has married... for love. But as it was on her first adventure, Sarah finds that things and people are not always what they seem. JS. Also see prequel, Nocturne.
Dansemacabre is a god of Labyrinth fanfics. She (he?) has written some of the best Labyrinth fanfics in existence (including The End of Days which I will also rec... as soon as I remember what it's about). This prolific author’s newest story, Dark Hour of Night, is more than living up to its predecessors.
Dark Hour of the Night is a very apt title. Dark creatures have taken over the Labyrinth, and a real sense of danger permeates the story. No one is safe from death, torture or mental anguish. Main characters could be killed at any time. The tension’s so thick you could slather it on a piece of bread and make a tension sandwich.
The author has made some very interesting and unique characterization choices. The antagonist of the piece is very well fleshed out. The story even seems to want the reader to feel sympathy with her plight. It’s debatable if she really even counts as a villain. I have no doubt that more sensitive readers WILL feel for her... However, my more blood thirsty mentality would still like to see Sarah thwap her upside the head with a frying pan.
Jareth's characterization is handled in a unique way as well. He comes across as very... vulnerable in this tale. Vulnerable Jareth isn’t something you see very often and it really wrung some powerful emotion from me. It was painful to read about such a proud King being brought to his knees. You almost feel like you should look away.
The only weak link in characterization is Sarah. Granted, time can wear away at foolhardy courage, but she's still been a bit too passive so far. This could certainly change in later chapters. I probably won't get any frying pan action, but I'd be very surprised if she remained inactive after hearing about a few of the events that took place in her absence.
Yes, that last sentence WAS vague. The story has an excellent mystery that's picks up speed and drama as each chapter unfolds. Mysteries surround Jareth, his new Queen, and her plans for the Labyrinth. The author really knows how to build suspense.
On a final note, DON'T read the prequel, at least not first. Considering a major draw of the story is the mystery, it gives bit more away than it should of Dark Hour of the Night's plot. At the very least, read it after you read all of the available chapters.
Link:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2987487/1/